Confessions of mind overflowing with thoughts...
Solemn resolve
Will to evolve
Fear to dissolve
Memories revolve
Conflicting notion
Overrated emotion
Daunting proportion
Constant Commotion
Means to prepare
Confidence to dare
Selfishness or care
Karma’s stare
Smile of content
Clarity of Intent
Actions meant
Nothing to repent
The goal in sight
In search guiding light
Something doesn’t seem right
Just another sleepless night
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7 comments:
You thought of so many things during the sleepless night?...must have been a racing thoughts night!...each line has a lot of meaning...deep
Thanks for the link...:)
Reflection of untainted, resolute, optimistic and true thoughts!
Loved it.
Hmmm turned out nice eventually...:-)
Advise - don't be in a hurry to post.Take your time - a quality author will always have a returning reader.
let me try this..
Khoob Bhalo :)..
hope that was right...
whos this gyanban true to his name?
@ Nalini - Yes it sure was :), thank you so much!!!
@ Zave - Sometimes it is difficult to retain the emotions in the confines of the language. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
@ Gyanban - as always thanks, I will keep the same in mind, thanks for always helping me improve!
@ Deepa - besh bolecho ;) you are learning my dear.
As for Gyanban, he is a guru of sorts, someone who has taught me a lot about writing and is my best and worst critic...You should check out his blog!!!
Hi dagny, I like writing & following poems..came upon this link, must say its nice...
If possible, do visit me at
www.assorted-platter.blogspot.com
would be glad if you could leave ur footprints too :)
its anythin but gibberish... :-)
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