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The Charmer;
Waltzing into my life sweet and slow
Words, smile and his charm to show
Would change my life, I didn’t know
The Rendezvous;
A simple arrangement of sharing
Joy, love and caring
Stealing from life, was I daring?
The Magic;
Silence transforming into best conversations
Laughter breaking walls of inhibitions
Being myself I was, without hesitation
The Bliss;
Hours of planning, for the next meet
Away from this world our heavenly retreat
Lost in dreams, my heart skipped a beat
The Love;
Now a thousand miles apart
Everyday yearning for another start
An unanswered prayer in my heart
The Life;
Won’t need a cure ever
Any happiness whatsoever
Can live in those moments forever
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21 comments:
Somehow I felt like our (me & my gf) story was retold. Though not entirely, yet felt so connected to the verses.
Loved this.
Keep blogging!
:)
Mast hai re... Mazzaa ane wala hai!
Arpita! u have expressed all the stuff love is made of so well. I loved it... keep them coming... check out my take for BPL too.. Click here
Arpita,
Beautiful:)
The charming rendevous of blissful magical life is courtesy love indeed :):):)
Ashes
very very beautiful.. the love can be seen very well through ur poem..
all the best for BPL.
oohh... Nice! very poetic and expressive!
so beautiful...your words brought back all the romantic interludes with my Hubby before we were married :)
Nice. Interesting idea giving titles for every stanza and the rhyme scheme.
Well written. One of a kind! Liked the language used :) All the best for BPL :)
Very beautiful, Arp! I didn't get it the first time, but I do now, and its really lovely.
aaww...that was sweeeettt :)
really well worded :)
This was so cute and so bloody relatable. :) The language was easy and the flow smooth. Awesome.
This was so cute and so bloody relatable. :) The language was easy and the flow smooth. Awesome.
That was short and sweet. Loved the style of writing. The titles for each stanza explained very well in one word the three lines below!! :) Interesting form of writing!!
I liked the magic part the best.
:P
loved this Arpita..amazing piece..a very different kind of a poetry style..good luck buddy..let's roar :D
I see some good three-rhyme code here! Interesting to read.
This was fucking awesome.
That was a nice piece of poetry there. Good luck for BPL :)
Good one...
Hey - How have you been? Loved this....
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