I can’t imagine my life without you my love
I will fight for you from heaven up above
We will be the always be with each other
I will leave you never
I can see the depths of oceans in your eyes
I see purity in them no deceit and no lies
We will have many a cherished moments
I will hurt you never
I like everything about you
I feel with you every moment is so true
We will be the happiest couple
I will doubt you never
I don’t care about your looks or how old you are
I want you near, and not very far
We will make every second seem like a dream
I will deceive you never
I will love you till the end of time
You are mine and only mine
We will treat each day like it is a lifetime
Cause tomorrow I may just change my mind
But that my love, I will tell you never
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19 comments:
thats a lovey dovey poem :) beautiful :D
not your best work - It happens to all of us at some point. What I do is keep the posts that are not to my satisfaction,in drafts, revisit them later, and then when the mood is right - the words just flow effortlessly.
please correct typo in the last para -
Hey thanks a bunch Rajlakshmi...
Which typo ya...did not find any, please help!!!
First time on your blog, and felt the love everywhere .. be it in this poem or your other works :)
"I will love you till the of time .. You are mine and only mine" .. Is love conditional now ?
Following you now .. leave your mars on my blog, so that I can trace you back :)
Take care..
Sourav .. in love with me and life!! :)
Hey Sourav, many thanks for stopping by and leaving your footprints...I am glad you felt that way, a lot of my friends feel I am too cynical as far as love goes and my posts more often than not reflect that...lol
Oh yeah, u'd be surprised at the amazing definition of love people have these days, if you haven't heard them already of course it all changes in a flash and is usually based on convenience.
Will move on to your blog now and see with my own eye you love for you and your life :>) thanks once again!!!
first time here....
your feelings feel so familiar...
though ur previous posts were better..
still i like your blog like no other...
Guess what? now i'm a follower!!
;-) nice work, dudette....
I'll be there for you through dawn to dusk,
I'll never let you be alone in spring or autumn,
We will be the always be with each other,
I will leave you never.
@ 7-ate-9 - Welcome to Soul Searching...and Many thanks for your kind words...I just went through your profile and yeah I agree, similar thoughts...I am glad to say it is wonderful to have been acquainted with you!!!
You are, invisibly?...well so am I now...I'd be sure to visit more often!!!
This post was just something I had to get out of my system :)
Take care and keep blogging...would be waiting to read more stuff!
Rav - wow, thanks a ton!!!
I will pen down a version 2 of this...co authored by Rav, what say ?
thanks a bunch for stopping by and leaving your footprints :)
thanks.. sounds great to have version 2 but co-author doesn't.. it's all yours! :)
Just Loved it....Gud work....Cheerzzz..... :-)
@ Rockinrav - roger that, thanks! :)
@ Thoughtful Delights - thanks again!
I could figure out the typo as well..
last para.. 1st line... I will love you till the **** of time.
* shows something missing...
Ishh...thanks a bunch, just corrected it! :)
Amazing, amazing, amazing!
Encompasses everything that makes love special!
Loved this piece!
@ Zave - Thanks for stopping by, leaving your footprints and your kind words...i was just trying to pen down what love in today's times boils down too!!!
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