Your memory of me lasts just as long as the season
My thoughts; misunderstandings
Yeah! go ahead try me for treason
I blame you for everything
Your stance for me from the very beginning
My retaliation; extremism
Yeah! go ahead sue me for this thing
I put forth a condition
Your charter for me built out of inhibition
My story; unheard
Yeah! go ahead treat it as trepidation
I don’t try to see
Your feelings for me
My feelings; crushed
Yeah! go ahead with the third degree
I am baffled by how you are wrong never
Your insistence on forever
My existence; denied
Yeah! go ahead let me be the cause of the tremor
Keeping a tab on every word, everything stated
Whew…it was never suppose to be this complicated
My decision; End of story!
Yeah! go ahead let me be the one hated
Posts
14 comments:
nice one Dagny, anger and nonchalance are two often misunderstood traits in this world...
:-). I love the exuberance
Thanks Aayan, I know exactly what you mean :-) especially nonchalance!
:) hey thanks a ton...appreciate it!...err what's your name?
I loved it....infact I think eminem would be happy to use it in his song...its very well written
hey this is interesting...poem... nice!!!
@Shahid - thanks a bunch, appreciate it... :) eminem would probably need double the words in the poem to compose in his style :-)
@ Siddhesh - thanks a ton!!!
A very beautiful expression!
Am actually kinda stumped! Damn good! :)
Thanks you Shilpa...really appreciate it!
profound...nice!
wow this is beautiful. very "soul searching" as you put it.. very intense and yet subtle..
how do you manage to write so well..?
@slipperythoughts - thanks a bunch, appreciate it!!!
@ Pooja - Thank you for your kind words, Welcome to Soul Searching, I just pen down my impressions!!! :)
Excellent...love the title and the tone of it.
Cheers
Megha (eugenicist.wordpress.com)
Thanks Megha! appreciate it. :)
Post a Comment