Thursday, January 14, 2010 | By: The Speaking Wood

Yeah! go ahead...
























I create distance and give you no reason
Your memory of me lasts just as long as the season
My thoughts; misunderstandings
Yeah! go ahead try me for treason

I blame you for everything
Your stance for me from the very beginning
My retaliation; extremism
Yeah! go ahead sue me for this thing

I put forth a condition
Your charter for me built out of inhibition
My story; unheard
Yeah! go ahead treat it as trepidation

I don’t try to see
Your feelings for me
My feelings; crushed
Yeah! go ahead with the third degree

I am baffled by how you are wrong never
Your insistence on forever
My existence; denied
Yeah! go ahead let me be the cause of the tremor

Keeping a tab on every word, everything stated
Whew…it was never suppose to be this complicated
My decision; End of story!
Yeah! go ahead let me be the one hated

14 comments:

Gyanban said... Best Blogger Tips

nice one Dagny, anger and nonchalance are two often misunderstood traits in this world...

Meghpeon said... Best Blogger Tips

:-). I love the exuberance

Dagny Taggart said... Best Blogger Tips

Thanks Aayan, I know exactly what you mean :-) especially nonchalance!

Dagny Taggart said... Best Blogger Tips

:) hey thanks a ton...appreciate it!...err what's your name?

Shahid Mukadam said... Best Blogger Tips

I loved it....infact I think eminem would be happy to use it in his song...its very well written

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said... Best Blogger Tips

hey this is interesting...poem... nice!!!

Dagny Taggart said... Best Blogger Tips

@Shahid - thanks a bunch, appreciate it... :) eminem would probably need double the words in the poem to compose in his style :-)

@ Siddhesh - thanks a ton!!!

Shilpa Garg said... Best Blogger Tips

A very beautiful expression!
Am actually kinda stumped! Damn good! :)

Dagny Taggart said... Best Blogger Tips

Thanks you Shilpa...really appreciate it!

slipperythoughts said... Best Blogger Tips

profound...nice!

Pooja said... Best Blogger Tips

wow this is beautiful. very "soul searching" as you put it.. very intense and yet subtle..
how do you manage to write so well..?

Dagny Taggart said... Best Blogger Tips

@slipperythoughts - thanks a bunch, appreciate it!!!

@ Pooja - Thank you for your kind words, Welcome to Soul Searching, I just pen down my impressions!!! :)

Miss Europhile said... Best Blogger Tips

Excellent...love the title and the tone of it.

Cheers
Megha (eugenicist.wordpress.com)

Dagny Taggart said... Best Blogger Tips

Thanks Megha! appreciate it. :)

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