Monday, April 11, 2011 | By: The Speaking Wood

The Mind Freeze!



















Darkness dark as this
That light ceases to exist
I’d give negativity a miss
But crying is hard to resist

Emotions they battle with themselves
Sanity is at stake
Tools I need lie on hidden shelves
Empty handed my destiny I try to make

From where will the strength come
When I don’t see anything
With bruised pieces some
I attempt something out of nothing

Forced to make compromise
The heart revolts
Controlling the feeling apprise
My attempts experience a jolt

Alone even with souls around
 Every voice is like a scream
Opinions unrelated abound
Nightmares replacing every dream

Faith is all I have to cling on too
Deterred by a mere breeze
Questioning where I belong too
As thoughts in mind freeze

I guess its just a passing phase
as I live for another day
my purpose isn't a wild goose chase
God willing I will find another way





6 comments:

p00ja said... Best Blogger Tips

Hi my first time here, but your words struck home,

Forced to make compromise
The heart revolts
Controlling the feeling apprise
My attempts experience a jolt.

In a way, these lines apply to most females in India, married especially! caste religion or language no bar, State, city or status no bar.

There's some kind of a pain in your words.
God bless and keep writing, it helps.

Vyankatesh said... Best Blogger Tips

Great lines.

Pleased to see that that it finishes on a positive note - wishing for a new beginning!!

Nick said... Best Blogger Tips

First time here, loved it!

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confusedyuppie said... Best Blogger Tips

thats beautiful. I can feel the ache in my heart!

Anonymous said... Best Blogger Tips

Tresspassing pain! ;)

Chakoli said... Best Blogger Tips

Really beautiful


Loved these lines

Faith is all I have to cling on too
Deterred by a mere breeze
Questioning where I belong too
As thoughts in mind freez

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