If only we could climb the mountains of doubt
We knew we could have moments to treasure
If we were not busy in quantities of measure
We knew we could cross all hurdles together
If we were not blaming each other
We knew we could make every second count all the way
If we were not so scared that we will grow apart someday
We had something special we both agreed
We know one small step is all it did need
Today all we have are ruins in the grains of sand
A dream wasted with its blood on our hand
There is still longing within our hearts
We could, really make a fresh start
Our eyes overwhelmed with dreams they still see
One small step, between you and me, who will it be?
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7 comments:
It was very nice. These are the situation we find ourselves one day or the other. I guess we should take the first step after analyzing the situation. Sometimes, we should wait for the other to approach. Isn't it? Anyways, nice post.
Hey Nethra, thanks a ton...yes I totally agree...the only glitch is you being wise to know when to do what...and therein probably lies the difference...I just feel, if there are two people who feel this bond with each other, they should just each take the step who knows even that might be together :-)
That is a good one! I can relate it very well with both personal and professional fronts of an individual. Well thought and written. Look forward for more!
le excellente ! IMHO this has got to be one of your best work to date..
great expression...don't we all feel this some times in our lives...but it is important to hold on and try to make things work with the person you have...it is easy to walk away and not try...its shows character to stick on and change yourself
you cant be Gods favourite....I Am!!!!
@Mohan - Thanks, really appreciate it, I'm glad you could relate to it...probably the best compliment for any writer. Sure!
@ Aayan - Thank you, thanks you :-)
@ Nalini - Yes, I totally agree...however, in today's time I have observed, people hardly wait long enough to explore possibilities...it is all about moving on!!!
@ Ganesh - errr....ok!!!
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